Is Research Saving or Killing Your Novel?

One of the best parts of writing, for me, is creating a world for my characters. No matter your genre, you must have a working knowledge of the environment in which the action happens. That knowledge can only come from doing your homework, or as novel writers everywhere whisper with fear and delight, “Research!”

Whether you write contemporary fiction or urban fantasy set in current and familiar cities, historical fiction with a need to re-create the past, or a dystopian fiction with yet-to-be-realized worlds, there is research required. Ask most writers and a gleam of excitement fills their heart and fear settles in their minds as they anticipate the thrill of discovery and the dread of the dark unknown forest.

Weeks pass and you’re still doing research. Every thread of knowledge leads you to more. You check out books and print….and print….and copy….and print. A month more and you are excited to learn about new countries, customs, histories, legends, famous people, unheard stories, relics, and archeological digs. Wait. What?

STOP!  At some point the writer in you says maybe I have enough research. You realize you have almost forgotten what you wanted to discover and have lost yourself in the finding of everything. Your departure from your novel has nearly cost you the thread of your intent. You, writer, are drowning in research and it’s killing your novel.

I speak from Experience

I’m in the middle of a novella, a prequel to an upcoming series. I know my characters but I’m writing about a time period which is unknown to me, creating events into an older world, bending histories to suit my needs. I needed to do research to bolster my fiction because good fiction is rooted in truth. That’s what sells the story. When I’m doing research I feel empowered as if I am learning magic.

But the truth is research can bog you down and sometimes I have ended up looking like this:

Your work suffers with an overabundance of unnecessary knowledge.

So what do you do?

TIPS FOR MAKING RESEARCH WORK FOR YOU

1. I recommend an outline. Know what you intend to research and leave yourself an outline with specific questions. You know what you want to know. Get those basics out of the way. Do it early before the major writing begins.

2. Once you have the basic info down, stop and begin the writing. When you hit a place in the story where you know you need more information, make a note about it and keep writing. I highly recommend a writer’s notebook for every novel or work in progress. I use it for notes, background information and all my research. I also use it for notations where I need more work. Refuse to let yourself be diverted by “holes.” This notebook will be the “dirt” you need for filler, later.

3. When you reach the end of your project (completion of the zero draft), now you can begin he work of filling the holes and doing the research you need to fill in the gaps.

  • The first rewrite is for fleshing out the world, building the framework for your story
  • The second rewrite is for rebuilding based on your notations and research
  • The third rewrite is for continuity and holes, making the research and the fantasy mesh together (beta readers are needed here).

This is how you keep research from killing your novel and instead you save yourself and your readers from overdosing on information.

How Do You Know When You Have Too Much Research?

When you spend all your time talking about the research and not about your story. When your research is what you crave doing instead of writing. When you’re busy collecting paper on this and that instead of chapter and scenes. If you are honest, you know when you cross the line into the “no man’s land” of too much knowledge. Only you can pull that plug. Just do it. Stick to your outline and your characters’ needs and you’ll do fine.

A Word About Quality Research

Googiing isn’t research. There, I said it. Google is great for telling you what you need to know, then the library is your friend.  HOWEVER…..

DONT LET THIS BE YOUR DESK!

Again, know when you have too much and force yourself to select only what you need. This is what I have for my main research:

My novella takes place in both the past and the present. I need information dealing with Europe from 850 ACE all the way through the Middle Ages. It is easy to get lost in the research.  

 
 
 

 

 

 

One pleasure and one danger is learning a new language for the main character. This is one way to lose yourself and forget what you were supposed to be researching. Tip: Mark the words you want and come back for them. 

 

Just like a novel with too much narrative or exposition, your novel suffers if you spend too much time doing research. I’ve seen writers abandon projects after months because they have forgotten what the novel was supposed to be about! I’ve seen writers get discouraged, believing they can’t possibly impart everything they have learned. Remember JK Rowling when you begin to feel like this — she kept notebooks of knowledge about characters and histories in the world of Harry Potter that she never used. Writers are supposed to know more than the reader or their characters. Don’t imagine that everything you’ve researched will always make it into your story. Be content to use only what you need and save the rest.

You never know, you might do a sequel, Or a trilogy. Or a series of short stories. Knowledge is never wasted unless it becomes the thing you do instead of the thing you learn.

Is research killing or saving your novel? I hope this will give you food for thought and that you will take time to access your work. Let research work for you instead of you working for it.

I welcome your ideas and suggestions on research. How do you manage yours?

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Thanks for stopping by!
Yours Between the Lines,
Sherry

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WIP (Works in Progress):

– Writer’s Workbook – Learning to Write Everyday – Beginners Volume  (expected April 2017)
– first novel in the Evening Bower series, about vampires and other supernatural creatures (Nov 2017)
– prequel novella to the Bower series (May 2017)
– four-part fairy story (part one complete) (Christmas 2017)

On the Desk: (next reading): A Conjuring of Light by VE Schwab

Off the Desk (book just finished): Stephen Blackmoore’s Hungry Ghosts

Coming Soon: More tips while writing that novel/Interviews/Odd Thoughts

11 Reasons You Can Use to Avoid NaNoWriMo (but won't)

November is less than a week away! For over a million folks, that means the start of National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo). If you are unfamiliar with what NaNoWriMo is then here is what it means in a nutshell: A month dedicated to the completion of 50K words, dedicated to a single novel/project. That’s it. One month of writing goals, chaos, frustration, joy, confusion, late nights, silliness, too much coffee (or soda), with the end result being a boatload of words which, hopefully, will lead to a successful novel in the future.

Now, if you are a regular author/novelist, the first question I get is “why.” The answer is easy for young writers, the unpublished, untrained, and inexperienced. The pupose of NaNo (for short) is to help you find your writing habit, to show you what dedication and commitment to your craft can do for you, how to write without stopping to edit or question yourself, how to trust that you have more words (and something to say) than you imagined. NaNo is commitment, dedicaiton, inspiration, comradierie, and proof. Proof that when you put your mind to it, you can actually finish something.

Finish. Notice I didn’t say “win.” Yes, NaNo says that if you succeed at getting 50K words in one month, then you “win” some prizes or get discounts to prizes. But that’s not really what they mean. The idea is to finish the month by writing every day.

And if you don’t get to 50K, that’s okay. The concept is learning to write every day, to never give up on yourself or your craft and to develop a strong writing habit.

The only losers to the program are the quitters.

But why bother with NaNo if you already write novels and are successful at it? Well, to be honest you probably would do it for the fun, for the companionship of others (we writers do get awfully solitary), and maybe for the challenge.

Of course, I’ve had several authors tell me, “I don’t need NaNo because I write all the time.” Okay, good for you.

Yet there are millions of people who do participate. Who want to believe. Who DO believe. And there are successful, published, best-selling authors who participate (as well as editors and agents).

So I have a list for those of you thinking about Nov 1, and the start of NaNo, or maybe just reading about it.

11 reasons you can use to Not to Participate, Give Up On or Quit NaNo (use as needed):

  1. You like to chat about writing a novel. You feel the excitement of it when you do, you’ve even tried writing about it in your journal or made some notes. You do it every year. You’re still talking about it. Stop talking about it. We know at this point you won’t do it. Just accept it and we’ll move on.
  2. You have children. They have things to do. They have schoolwork. You have to drive them. You need to supervise homework. You don’t have time for writing when you have to do math.
  3. Soccor, ballet, football, school programs, choir, band, karate, volunteer work, cheer squad, gymnastics. You are never home.
  4. If you don’t clean the house it won’t get done. Who has time when the toilets are calling. And laundry? Oh we won’t even talk about how you have to supervise the washer and dryer.
  5. You have a blog to keep up, facebook post, twitter to update, LinkedIn to add, Goodreads book reviews to give and sale (of your old books) to check on Amazon and Smashwords.
  6. You feel headachy and tired. Who can write when the body says it’s tired?
  7. Who wants to actually read what you write? No one cares about this stuff!
  8. And worse, what happens afterwards when no one likes it? Why did I bother?
  9. There will be other projects, other NaNo years.
  10. You have a real job. You can’t be expected to do both especially when one isn’t paying the bills.
  11. Your spouse/sig other/best friend isn’t involved and just can’t relate.

There. I hope those help you successfully rationalize yourself out of NaNoWriMo.

However, if you know that all of those are bunk, if you know that you must write and it doesn’t matter about what, if you know that you aren’t writing for others and you are writing for yourself, if you know that at the end of the day the day isn’t done until you do write, if you believe that words matter no matter how few, if you know that support will come from other writers despite those closest to you not “getting” you, then NaNo is exactly for you (no matter the word count).

Because you know that the writing must happen. Like breathing. Sick or well. Kids or job. The writing is important to you and must get done, will get done, because you make it important enough.

Because it’s a Nike (just do it) feeling.

If you know these things, then I’ll see you there (nanowrimo.org) on November 1. Because how could we not?

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Am being interviewed tonight!!  Tune in to the Ron Shaw Show at 8pm EDT to listen live! Or come back tomorrow (or later) to listen to the recording in the archive. I’m excited and nervous. We’ll be talking about my books By Light Betrayed – Poetry of the Vampires and Midnight Assassin: A Tale of Lust and Revenge.

Bring your wine and popcorn and a friend! And let me know what you think, ok?

Wish me Good Luck!

Yours Between the Lines,
Sherry

 

****The following items will always appear to keep you posted on activities.*****

WIP (Works in Progress): 
– first novel in the Evening Bower series, about vampires and other supernatural creatures
– fictional memoir
– four-part fairy story (part one complete)

On the Desk: (next reading): Some Like It Witchy (#5) by Heather Blake

Off the Desk (book just finished): The Goodbye Witch (#4) by Heather Blake

Coming Soon:  What I love and hate about NaNoWriMo/More interviews/Holiday Chaos